Gonna be real honest, I have never liked Haiku unless they are exceptionally well done.
They offer a weird midpoint of constraint levels, giving you too much freedom to truly be concise, and not enough syllables to be truly get a message across, unless you are really good.
Could you try writing a good six-word-story about it instead? Those are really impressive, when they are well done.
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Gonna be real honest, I have never liked Haiku unless they are exceptionally well done.
They offer a weird midpoint of constraint levels, giving you too much freedom to truly be concise, and not enough syllables to be truly get a message across, unless you are really good.
Could you try writing a good six-word-story about it instead? Those are really impressive, when they are well done.
Regardless, I am not a fan of Haiku.
Haikus are too long. Fuck em.
Six word story. Say no more.
Lazy joke response.
Many such cases.
Lazy joke response.
Many such cases.
"Does she go? Say no more." -Eric Idle
I was never fond of Haiku
That was my attempt.
IFIFY:
IFI:
Soft voice of woman
Very pleasant on the eyes
A challenging wank.
You fucked it for me.
One more word; baby, you got a poem going.
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You fucked it for me faggot.
Shakespeare
Thou hast put me into ruin and art therefore rightfully to be called a miscreant!
Voice of woman...on the ears...
😎
I should've included that emoji in the haiku.